tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post8152964818748719423..comments2023-09-27T17:05:29.308+02:00Comments on haiku-pupil: Ralf Brökerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-91195328237595237832011-03-18T10:30:18.673+01:002011-03-18T10:30:18.673+01:00Thank you all!
@_m: Yes, my tears are in my eyes ...Thank you all!<br /><br />@_m: Yes, my tears are in my eyes - and I was the reason.<br /><br />@Janice: It still has the same effect on me.<br /><br />@Rudi: It opens many ways, I think. The moment it came was more like your first thought. But don't we all think about not being here anymore while watching with closed eyes?<br /><br />@Lorraine: All kind of feelings are all kinds of wealth, I think.<br /><br />@Bill, Masago, Devika: yes!<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-51983746292542488492011-03-15T08:26:43.024+01:002011-03-15T08:26:43.024+01:00Good sets, Ralf..first one is kind of familiar; an...Good sets, Ralf..first one is kind of familiar; and second, could be read in a few ways for the ambiguity in Line 1, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-19196606538599546052011-03-13T19:12:15.057+01:002011-03-13T19:12:15.057+01:00Says it all.Says it all.Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-5386272511386553322011-03-10T18:55:42.839+01:002011-03-10T18:55:42.839+01:00A good pairA good pairBillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-10717977356298467392011-03-09T22:23:33.182+01:002011-03-09T22:23:33.182+01:00After reading and reading I've got a dark feel...After reading and reading I've got a dark feeling: I don't hope the second ku describes a funeral (in the eyes of a person who passed away no tears of surviving dependants are depicted). Am I wrong?<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RudiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-40080914724941861582011-03-09T14:31:45.830+01:002011-03-09T14:31:45.830+01:00I get a few sentiments that kind of hurt, it is so...I get a few sentiments that kind of hurt, it is so beautifully written Ralf...Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-10648750954377577672011-03-09T09:16:34.707+01:002011-03-09T09:16:34.707+01:00Sunshine through closed eyes - That's the sun ...Sunshine through closed eyes - That's the sun inside as well. Happy must be everybody with this sun inside. I like this image.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RudiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-31061880319883033642011-03-09T02:16:26.045+01:002011-03-09T02:16:26.045+01:00Gosh Ralf I too really like that second verse - it...Gosh Ralf I too really like that second verse - it brings a lump to my throat...Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-352155776402134742011-03-08T02:23:36.588+01:002011-03-08T02:23:36.588+01:00Lovely linkage. I really like the second.
__My te...Lovely linkage. I really like the second.<br /><br />__My tears are not in your eyes, yet, I may have caused them.<br />_mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.com