tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post8433078285307176119..comments2023-09-27T17:05:29.308+02:00Comments on haiku-pupil: Ralf Brökerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-78352004109733069292009-12-10T21:53:01.541+01:002009-12-10T21:53:01.541+01:00Thank you, jem. And for sure: they all are ...
Be...Thank you, jem. And for sure: they all are ...<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-78691241947736392009-12-09T11:41:57.600+01:002009-12-09T11:41:57.600+01:00These work so well together. I like the third one...These work so well together. I like the third one best. I wonder if all children everywhere are drawn to the reddest of leaves.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-46977472809294321402009-11-28T14:21:00.581+01:002009-11-28T14:21:00.581+01:00Thank you very much everybody!
Best wishes
RalfThank you very much everybody!<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-7609479162375851222009-11-28T13:09:57.512+01:002009-11-28T13:09:57.512+01:00well done ralfwell done ralfJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-55624273203023161542009-11-27T21:15:17.613+01:002009-11-27T21:15:17.613+01:00Grand group, here Ralf! _mGrand group, here Ralf! _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-46208097566292518362009-11-27T15:31:36.277+01:002009-11-27T15:31:36.277+01:00these glasses
in these dewdrops
on these leaves
t...<i>these glasses<br />in these dewdrops<br />on these leaves</i><br /><br />this one my favourite of the series<br /> <br />much love<br />gillenaGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-12014820408817479312009-11-27T08:01:40.553+01:002009-11-27T08:01:40.553+01:00wonderful collection!wonderful collection!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-37799185757613220962009-11-23T10:46:46.083+01:002009-11-23T10:46:46.083+01:00A mixed lot, Ralf :)
Good imageries,
wishes,
dev...A mixed lot, Ralf :)<br />Good imageries,<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-40055559898273480502009-11-22T14:54:39.608+01:002009-11-22T14:54:39.608+01:00Wonderful series. Especially loved the one about t...Wonderful series. Especially loved the one about the children.gautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-14562758883303843642009-11-22T11:59:24.033+01:002009-11-22T11:59:24.033+01:00Interesting poem.
Thanks for your comment on my b...Interesting poem.<br /> Thanks for your comment on my blog...now with your comment I find another aspect of Goethe's saying; this new aspect is deeper and more philosophical.<br />Best,<br />Nicenicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12169651130361197508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-88671515379854333252009-11-22T11:02:00.915+01:002009-11-22T11:02:00.915+01:00yes each mood so beautifully written, it's won...yes each mood so beautifully written, it's wonderful Ralf :)Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-31011577820381227122009-11-22T06:16:36.078+01:002009-11-22T06:16:36.078+01:00I love this set, Ralf. The imagery is wonderful!I love this set, Ralf. The imagery is wonderful!Kristin Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16779222705654595462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-82997664190529479292009-11-21T17:34:34.550+01:002009-11-21T17:34:34.550+01:00Vielen Dank für Deine Gedanken. Sie sind mir wicht...Vielen Dank für Deine Gedanken. Sie sind mir wichtig.<br /><br />"Glasses" sind im Übrigen auch Lupen; und das sicherlich un-haikueske ;-) dreifach-"these" soll akustisch den Ort der Beobachtung vergegenwärtigen. Ein Versuch ...<br /><br />Viele Grüße<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6286251947719537492.post-3227732336299178912009-11-21T17:05:44.242+01:002009-11-21T17:05:44.242+01:00...sehr zarte eindrücke, wie nebenbei entdeckt und......sehr zarte eindrücke, wie nebenbei entdeckt und skizziert, ein jedes für sich...<br /><br />nur zwei fragen: glasses in these dewdrops on these leaves - soll "glasses" für "Gläser"/Scherben/Brillengläser/?" stehen, oder wolltest du den vergleich vermeiden, dass sie wie gläserne kugeln erscheinen, dass sie gläsernen kügelchen gleichen? <br /><br />warum die dreimalige nennung des demonstrativ pronomens "these" - es erstaunt mich, da es sehr umständlich daherkommt - aber warum nicht, schließlich sind es ja gerade diese tautropfen hier und nicht die in japan...<br /><br />freue mich auf deine antwortLadyArthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572970868769129254noreply@blogger.com