26.03.09


the sun
on every pitchfork
full of hay

Die Sonne

auf jeder Forke
voll Heu

          
Haiku heute march 2009


Kommentare:

Magyar hat gesagt…

A very nice image, Rolf!
_m

In English, though, -on- of L2 is not needed.

Masago hat gesagt…

Yes, nice pivot (and if you want to keep the pivot, you'll need to keep "on" in L2). :-)

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

This delightful image took me back to my youth on the farm. Lovely!

Tikkis hat gesagt…

As Janine, I have done that! Yes! I still can smell the scent of fresh hay!

Magyar hat gesagt…

_I read this in my own inept fashion. I'm out of that channel, and fully agree with Masago... my apologies extended.
_m

RBroeker hat gesagt…

@ Magyar: No need to - but I must admit: First you made sweat, then I was allowed to relax. Great that you like it.

@ Masago: Thank you for commendation and support!

@ Janice: Yes, my mothers brothers and sisters used to be farmers and I loved haying. I remembered that when someone fed his cattle some time ago.

@ Tikkis: It tickles a bit, doesn't it?

Thank you to all of you!

Best wishes
Ralf

Devika hat gesagt…

A lovely imagery there, Ralf :)

even i belong to a farming family as a daughter-in-law, and being from a city, who loves country-side i enjoy every moment I am there :)

wishes,
de

Frank Williams hat gesagt…

Lovely haiku...

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you Devika (and on this way: I enjoy your Abstract Deductions very much).

Thanks a lot, Frank (have to read in your blog now).

Best wishes
Ralf

Devika hat gesagt…

oh thanks, Ralf :)

came looking for a new one..

wishes,
devika

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

exqusite; all of seven or eight words

much love
gillena

RBroeker hat gesagt…

@ Devika: coming soon ...

@ Gillena: thank you!

Best wishes
Ralf

Tikkis hat gesagt…

tickles, also sweating, yes, but during the hay-season we had the sauna every day...

(I am going to sauna without tickling or sweating, also!)

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Sauna without sweating? When I see a steambath or a sauna or sauna or something like that my water runs like snow in the sun.

Best wishes
Ralf

PS: Will have a look at our dicing-project now ...