17.03.09


photograph: rbroeker, 1.2009



your laughter  a cloud  southward


dein Lachen  eine Wolke  gen Süden


        
Haiku-wortART-Forum winter haiku contest 2009


Kommentare:

© GeBe hat gesagt…

I like this ku, very nice.

All the best,
Gesine

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you, Gesine Becker!

Best wishes
Ralf

Devika hat gesagt…

First time here RBroeker,

Lovely collection here :)
will visit often...

wishes,
devika

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you, Devika. Read your comments in Angelikas blog and had many visits on yours since then. Enjoyed and will enjoy it very much!

Best wishes
Ralf

Magyar hat gesagt…

Good one... and I really like the translation provided, it adds another depth.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you, Magyar. I feel pleased, but I know there is a long way to go.

Best wishes
Ralf

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

Thank you for visiting me at Lunch break, looking forward to seeing you often,

morning moon-
three shadows
on the road

much love
gillena

Tikkis hat gesagt…

southwards
drifting clouds
coming from north

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot, Gillena and Tikkis!

Illuminated borders.
His little finger
travels fast.

Best wishes
Ralf

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

I like this and the translation as well.
Thanks for your comment Ralf - look forward to visiting here.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much, Janice. I'll try to keep on writing and visiting.

Best wishes
Ralf