05.05.09



at the roadhouse
a flock of ravens
forms and forms


Kommentare:

polona hat gesagt…

i saw your comments around others' blogs and came to look in :)
you write very nice haiku... will be back

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

i like the repitition in line 3, makes your ku come alive

Devika hat gesagt…

here I agree with Gillena, Ralf :)

wishes,
devika

Frank Williams hat gesagt…

Nice haiku Ralf - very Hitchcock-ian

Lorraine hat gesagt…

I close my eyes and see it soooo clearly, again, I can only say, i love this...:)

John McDonald hat gesagt…

nice one Ralf

Dalloway hat gesagt…

I think Frank's right... it is very Hitchcock

Gabriele Brunsch hat gesagt…

I like the movement ... there is this very mysterious agitation - a flock - how many might that be, will they finally rest quietly - but no, they don't settle down ... they form and form...

A good haiku, Frank, thank you for sharing it with me...

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot everybody. If you see a stout man with a little hair and a smile on his face in horror-movie: thus it could have been me?

(8-)>

Best wishes
Ralf

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

I really enjoyed a different image - of restless birds congregating more and more around a pub just as the people do...good one Ralf.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Yes, Janice, the traffic forms and forms, the guests do ...

Best wishes
Ralf