Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
i saw your comments around others' blogs and came to look in :)you write very nice haiku... will be back
i like the repitition in line 3, makes your ku come alive
here I agree with Gillena, Ralf :)wishes, devika
Nice haiku Ralf - very Hitchcock-ian
I close my eyes and see it soooo clearly, again, I can only say, i love this...:)
nice one Ralf
I think Frank's right... it is very Hitchcock
I like the movement ... there is this very mysterious agitation - a flock - how many might that be, will they finally rest quietly - but no, they don't settle down ... they form and form...A good haiku, Frank, thank you for sharing it with me...
Thanks a lot everybody. If you see a stout man with a little hair and a smile on his face in horror-movie: thus it could have been me? (8-)> Best wishesRalf
I really enjoyed a different image - of restless birds congregating more and more around a pub just as the people do...good one Ralf.
Yes, Janice, the traffic forms and forms, the guests do ...Best wishesRalf