Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
"artery" I suppose, not atery, isn't it?Anyway interesting juxtaposition between outside and inside. This correlation (outside/inside) is a great technique.Best wishesRudi
Yes, Rudi, thanks a lot for that information. I changed it. Great that you like the construction.Best wishesRalf
Rudi is spot on... the juxtaposition works well
Yes, well done Ralf.
Thank you for coming in and thinking about my verse, Dalloway and Janice.Best wishesRalf
Nice one...Take care
Thanks a lot, samrina. And please forgive me that I didn't see your comment for this long time. Like your blog!Best wishesRalf