22.09.09



Flood-meadow--
can't even hear
the main artery

Kommentare:

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

"artery" I suppose, not atery, isn't it?
Anyway interesting juxtaposition between outside and inside. This correlation (outside/inside) is a great technique.

Best wishes
Rudi

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Yes, Rudi, thanks a lot for that information. I changed it. Great that you like the construction.

Best wishes
Ralf

Dalloway hat gesagt…

Rudi is spot on... the juxtaposition works well

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

Yes, well done Ralf.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you for coming in and thinking about my verse, Dalloway and Janice.

Best wishes
Ralf

Sam!! hat gesagt…

Nice one...

Take care

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot, samrina. And please forgive me that I didn't see your comment for this long time. Like your blog!

Best wishes
Ralf