29.09.09



13 Kommentare:

Anonym hat gesagt…

I am teacher. I can imagine giggling teens. You wrote as a father with great empathy. Right?

The scene is very original.
Best wishes
Rudi

LadyArt hat gesagt…

...when there is no real reason to laugh but mere happiness you can laugh about laughing and it is so refreshing... many wonderful moments like that...

Kristin Riggs hat gesagt…

This is fantastic! This is why I teach 6th grade (just one year younger)!!! :)

Devika Jyothi hat gesagt…

Oh that was too good, Ralf...and to have it as a haiga..with her laughing :)

I am 41...I know the folly of it...yet I do the same thing...it easens me, and others here say it easens them too....and I know laughter was the word you suggested at Alan Summers' :)

Your child is teaching, not knowing she's....whats her name? :)

wishes,
devika

Emma Dalloway hat gesagt…

this is lots of fun

Laurie A. hat gesagt…

you've captured thirteen well, Ralf! so very well!!

John McDonald hat gesagt…

love it's joy

Dave Serjeant hat gesagt…

Excellent - brilliant senryu accompanied by a great photo. Love how the repetition of the word laughter is echoed in the two laughters of the image. Top haiga!

jem hat gesagt…

Oh yes, those were the days. Such true sentiments. Very rare to let oneself go like that as an adult.

Ralf Bröker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much everybody. I feel very honoured. The picture was taken on my daughter's birthday. It shows some of her friends.

Best wishes
Ralf

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

Absolutely delightful Ralf.

haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) hat gesagt…

Well done!

Ralf Bröker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot, Janice and Angelika!

Best wishes
Ralf