Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
this is delightful, ralf! you capture you, the sky and everyone in between in, so few words... wonderful
In a way we all own a piece of that sky.
Very intimate and emotional. It reminds me of my childhood. I looked for clouds with special forms. I looked for a star which should be mine... You are lucky when you are able to preserve such feelings.Best wishesRudi
Very nice, Ralf :)to own a piece of sky...a cloud...who doesn't long, wishes, devika
And yes, as Rudi says it has a very child-like quality -- delightful :)devika
...positive thinking, but, is it really so? isn't the cloud in the blue sky an irritation - also nehme ich die folgen (wie auch immer) auf mich - aber vermutlich denke ich wieder mal zu kompliziert......macht nichts, ich finde es faszinierend einen text vor mir zu haben, der so knapp ist und doch so viel haiku birgt...
... and I always thought that cloud was mine!Just love this one Ralf! _m
Und ich verstehe es so, dass du diesen ganzen blauen Himmel als Wolke siehst ... LG, Rachel
enjoyed this. Also reminds me of picking raindrops on a window and watching mine race the others to the bottom.
Awww...I love this. What a romantic thought...to possess a piece of the sky. Lovely!!! :)
Thanks a lot everybody.Best wishesRalf
Thank you, Vaughn.Best wishesRalf
yes, it's yours.
Thanks a lot, T. and Andrew.Best wishesRalf
"Hey you, get off of my cloud" -Rolling StonesLovely, I'll have to check back often, and will have to check out the German blog :)
Thanks a lot, ABQ Annie. That's a fine line!Best wishesRalf
I like it. Somehow we always notice the thing that stands out. At the moment I'd like to claim a small piece of blue sky as my own.