...again one of your very mysterious poems. there seem to be some everyday actions put together, but at the same moment my fantasy just starts floating along a trail of possibilities... who made the arrangement - and what kind of arrangement - historical events light up - and I do congratulate you again... so much haiku in the little bowl of a short, incomplete sentence cut into three lines...
Just watch the moon, which is nearly full. Why should you have this artificial illumination inside, when you can enjoy this light outside? That's what I read in your ku. Best wishes rudi
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...again one of your very mysterious poems. there seem to be some everyday actions put together, but at the same moment my fantasy just starts floating along a trail of possibilities...
who made the arrangement - and what kind of arrangement - historical events light up - and I do congratulate you again... so much haiku in the little bowl of a short, incomplete sentence cut into three lines...
Just watch the moon, which is nearly full. Why should you have this artificial illumination inside, when you can enjoy this light outside?
That's what I read in your ku.
Best wishes
rudi
nice, i like the mystery element, Ralf :)
wishes,
devika
Nicely intriguing.
very mysterious! what would happen?
:) Hope u gonna have a great weekend :))
Best wishes!
Ralf, ich habe auch sofort an den Vollmond gedacht, beim Lesen ...
bin wieder fasziniert!
herzlich, Rachel
I think candlelight and weekends go hand-in-hand very nicely...at least they do around my house! :) This is wonderful!
this one has everyone speculating Ralf... good one!
enjoyed this
Nicely done! _m
Thanks a lot everybody! Vielen Dank!
Best wishes
Ralf
I like where my imaginations takes me after reading this!
This is what it was made for, Gautami. Thanks!
Best wishes
Ralf
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