06.02.10



longest night
a glove without fingers
freezes on a fence post

Kommentare:

Masago hat gesagt…

Intriguing!

Devika hat gesagt…

ohh!! what an image!!

Good to see you back in the blogland, Ralf :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald hat gesagt…

yes great image
john

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

the biting harshness of the cold; is clearly stated

much love
gillena

Rachel hat gesagt…

Lieber Ralf,

deine kurzen Zeilen beinhalten eine richtig kleine Geschichte...
sehr klug gedacht...

herzlichst, Rachel

Lorraine hat gesagt…

Oh that feeling of cold comes through so wonderfuly, bravo Ralf :)

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much everybody.

BTW: unfortunately I can't comment in some of your blogs. I click "comments", another page comes, but the comment-field at the bottom of the pages isn't activated. This is why I couldn't write in your blog, Lorraine and Rachel.

I had no problems, when the comment-field is on the right (like Masago, John, and Gillena have).

Any idea?

Best wishes
Ralf

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

This ku makes me being cold. So it's opening wide.
Best wishes
Rudi

Lorraine hat gesagt…

Strange isn't it, sometimes it does that to me on my own blog...imagine that, I've checked and disabled or abled or did what needed to be done, and still...oh well...thanks always for trying ;)

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Yes, Lorraine, but now I found a way: Opera and temporarily less security. Poetry was risky in all times, right?

Thanks Rud. (I must admit: while thinking of this scene hot drops of sweat appear in my neck ...)

Best wishes
Ralf

Henrique Pimenta hat gesagt…

... [sur]real snapshot...

old pajamas hat gesagt…

Ralf,

Yes, the poem brings more than an intellectual response; rather a visceral reaction, I had, to the freezing cold and to the fingers that aren't there.....

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you for coming by, Henrique and pajamas.

Best wishes
Ralf