Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
Flyin the bottle.What color has the sky?
Chrysanthemum, April 2010
Ralf,This is a wonderful poem, minimalist to great effect. Thank you.....pajamas
the theme of enclosure nicely well handledmuch lovegillena
I could never write something this subtle and have such intensity to it, you rock ;)
Lieber Ralf,toll, einfach gut...LG, Rachel
I like the quiet intensity of this.
It depends. The fly and we have got different points of view. You wrote a philosopic ku fitting to a theory of cognition. Well done.Best wishesRudi
very nice :)
Stark minimalism which prompts the reader to ponder perspectives. Nicely done!
Very nice post, Ralf...
__I too like this minimalism... a fine one Ralf! __In some fashion, are we not all... our own 'fly in the bottle?'_m
Thanks a lot everybody.Best wishesRalf