Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
a busy weekend? no matter, the sun's up longer and the warmer weather will keep you going... lovely
Nice, hope you had a good time, Ralf :)wishes, devika
Lovely, and new I always think of rendez-vous as a Summer fling ;)
This delightful haiga reminds of my youth when getting together on a Sunday was a big deal...
A dreamy ride home._m
This is a little scene that I love very much - it is open in the end. I prefer the following version: home means the place I love to be and there is somebody waiting who I am in love with - and with this beloved person I will have a rendevous ...Thank you for this wonderful Haiku
A touching moment...
Hallo Ralf,I dare to write down a variation - maybe more condensed.driving in springdriving homefor a rendezvousMy regret ist that Sunday got lost.Anyway spring and rendezvous are a perfect juxtaposition.Best wisheshave a nice and creative weekendRudi
Thank you all very much. I feel honoured that you like it, for to me this one is a very personal verse. Quite difficult to open it to other people.Frohe Pfingsten! (Happy pentecost - as far as I can translate it.)Best wishesRalf
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a busy weekend? no matter, the sun's up longer and the warmer weather will keep you going... lovely
Nice, hope you had a good time, Ralf :)
wishes,
devika
Lovely, and new I always think of rendez-vous as a Summer fling ;)
This delightful haiga reminds of my youth when getting together on a Sunday was a big deal...
A dreamy ride home.
_m
This is a little scene that I love very much - it is open in the end.
I prefer the following version:
home means the place I love to be and there is somebody waiting who I am in love with - and with this beloved person I will have a rendevous ...
Thank you for this wonderful Haiku
A touching moment...
Hallo Ralf,
I dare to write down a variation - maybe more condensed.
driving in spring
driving home
for a rendezvous
My regret ist that Sunday got lost.
Anyway spring and rendezvous are a perfect juxtaposition.
Best wishes
have a nice and creative weekend
Rudi
Thank you all very much. I feel honoured that you like it, for to me this one is a very personal verse. Quite difficult to open it to other people.
Frohe Pfingsten! (Happy pentecost - as far as I can translate it.)
Best wishes
Ralf
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