17.06.09



A plough amidst
the rich land
sparrows spatting


Kommentare:

Devika hat gesagt…

Ploughing the land -- one of my favourite hobbies, and then irrigating and planting....if birds are around the fun is all the more :)

Lovely moment, Ralf :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald hat gesagt…

enjoyed these Ralf

Lorraine hat gesagt…

such a lovely image, spatting and all ;) lol

Frank Williams hat gesagt…

A nice haiku Ralf. Interesting use of the word "spatting"...

haiku-shelf hat gesagt…

I do like the sound of the last line!
More and more the sound in haiku is very important for me.

Best wishes,
Angelika

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…
Dieser Kommentar wurde vom Autor entfernt.
Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

Sorry, deleted an ugly typo.

I agree. This alliteration (spa- spa-) and this onomatopoeia (spatting) ist great and reminds me of the German word "tschilpen" which means the noise which sparrows make. And certainly a ploughed land is a wonderful place for sparrows where they can find some nice food.

All the best
Rudi

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot everybody.

Best wishes
Ralf

gautami tripathy hat gesagt…

Wonderful alliteration.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you, Gautami.

Best wishes
Ralf