I agree. This alliteration (spa- spa-) and this onomatopoeia (spatting) ist great and reminds me of the German word "tschilpen" which means the noise which sparrows make. And certainly a ploughed land is a wonderful place for sparrows where they can find some nice food.
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Ploughing the land -- one of my favourite hobbies, and then irrigating and planting....if birds are around the fun is all the more :)
Lovely moment, Ralf :)
wishes,
devika
enjoyed these Ralf
such a lovely image, spatting and all ;) lol
A nice haiku Ralf. Interesting use of the word "spatting"...
I do like the sound of the last line!
More and more the sound in haiku is very important for me.
Best wishes,
Angelika
Sorry, deleted an ugly typo.
I agree. This alliteration (spa- spa-) and this onomatopoeia (spatting) ist great and reminds me of the German word "tschilpen" which means the noise which sparrows make. And certainly a ploughed land is a wonderful place for sparrows where they can find some nice food.
All the best
Rudi
Thanks a lot everybody.
Best wishes
Ralf
Wonderful alliteration.
Thank you, Gautami.
Best wishes
Ralf
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