14.07.09



Tax return--
on a slip of paper
her perfume

Steuererklärung--
an einem Beleg
ihr Parfum


Haiku heute, Juni 2009


Kommentare:

LadyArt hat gesagt…

...wie es Dir gelingt etwas so unpoetisches wie eine Steuererklärung in ein so romantisches Licht zu tauchen ist beeindruckend...
Und wenn da nicht eine ganze Landung H A I K U drin ist...

Liebste Grüße

Laure hat gesagt…

this is very evocative, Ralf. I really like it.

Dalloway hat gesagt…

I really like it too... anything that can make a tax return sexy is ok by me

Devika hat gesagt…

Hope it wasn't a taxing one, Ralf :)
really i find some perfumes very taxing! (and some women too :))

anyway, nice haiku moment :)

wishes,
devika

Lorraine hat gesagt…

a Curious sensation I get, I have two interpretation, and I love both ;)

Masago hat gesagt…

Very good.

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

"slip of paper" - oh my goodness! Tax return on a slip - what a tax office have you got in your town? Maybe I am fantasising. I never read a tax return which was so intimate as you got one.
Well, in some way your ku is a satiric one. Or did i write a satire?

Best wishes
Rudi

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

interesting and surprising juxtaposition
'perfume' and 'tax return'

much love
gillena

RBroeker hat gesagt…
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RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you eyerybody. Great to have haiku-friends like you. Need a break for some days because of family reasons.

Best wishes
Ralf

jem hat gesagt…

Scent is so evocative. I love the way it gets caught on things.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks for that, Jem. Great you took that long time to explore this little blog.

Best wishes
Ralf