...wie es Dir gelingt etwas so unpoetisches wie eine Steuererklärung in ein so romantisches Licht zu tauchen ist beeindruckend... Und wenn da nicht eine ganze Landung H A I K U drin ist...
"slip of paper" - oh my goodness! Tax return on a slip - what a tax office have you got in your town? Maybe I am fantasising. I never read a tax return which was so intimate as you got one. Well, in some way your ku is a satiric one. Or did i write a satire?
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...wie es Dir gelingt etwas so unpoetisches wie eine Steuererklärung in ein so romantisches Licht zu tauchen ist beeindruckend...
Und wenn da nicht eine ganze Landung H A I K U drin ist...
Liebste Grüße
this is very evocative, Ralf. I really like it.
I really like it too... anything that can make a tax return sexy is ok by me
Hope it wasn't a taxing one, Ralf :)
really i find some perfumes very taxing! (and some women too :))
anyway, nice haiku moment :)
wishes,
devika
a Curious sensation I get, I have two interpretation, and I love both ;)
Very good.
"slip of paper" - oh my goodness! Tax return on a slip - what a tax office have you got in your town? Maybe I am fantasising. I never read a tax return which was so intimate as you got one.
Well, in some way your ku is a satiric one. Or did i write a satire?
Best wishes
Rudi
interesting and surprising juxtaposition
'perfume' and 'tax return'
much love
gillena
Thank you eyerybody. Great to have haiku-friends like you. Need a break for some days because of family reasons.
Best wishes
Ralf
Scent is so evocative. I love the way it gets caught on things.
Thanks for that, Jem. Great you took that long time to explore this little blog.
Best wishes
Ralf
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