08.09.09



eastmoon's orange
in the silver linden
rustling of rye


Kommentare:

Devika hat gesagt…

Oh i love this, Ralf :)
very poetic scene,

wishes,
devika

LadyArt hat gesagt…

Dear Ralf,
how many pictures, sounds and colours you touch - a sensitive walk through early autumn - evening or night - ? - I like it very much...

Lorraine hat gesagt…

delightful senses again, you are so good at that, I lvo eit ;)

Frank Williams hat gesagt…

A lovely image in words Ralf...

Dalloway hat gesagt…

this is very poetic, ralf - one of my favourites of yours - I could read it over and over again

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

Beautiful soothing imagery Ralf - like Emma I read it many times.

Masago hat gesagt…

Intriguing.

John McDonald hat gesagt…

excellent Ralf (congrats on another mainichi entry)

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot everybody - I was very unsure, 'cause I thought, this one might embody a sort of plenty.

@ John: Couldn't find a verse of mine in Mainichi, but I read very nice haiku from Claudia Brefeld (9.9.) and Rudi Pfaller (10.9.) there.

Best wishes
Ralf

Kristin Riggs hat gesagt…

Nice. :)

gautami tripathy hat gesagt…

I can hear that rustling..

Rachel hat gesagt…

Herbstfarbene Spätsommerworte...

dies gefällt auch

herzlich, der Rachel;-)

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Dankeschön, Rachel :-)

Viele Grüße
Ralf

RBroeker hat gesagt…

And thank you very much for your friendly comments, Kristin and Gautami.

Best wishes
Ralf

Inside our hands, outside our hearts hat gesagt…

Oh this is perfect. It feels like fall, as if I am covered by the warmest of blankets and roasting pumpkin seeds.

T

Magyar hat gesagt…

I really like the joining of -geographical direction- and the moon... it seems to add more value to that word. Fine one Ralf. _m

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot, T and _M!

Best wishes
Ralf

discordant melody hat gesagt…

Like this very much Ralf, nice feeling to it. I'm enjoying your haiku! Thxx for visiting me on my blog...love your comments! Are we following each other on Twitter?

discordant melody hat gesagt…

I just followed you on Twitter...I'm @nibblesandbits

RBroeker hat gesagt…

So did I, _dm. And thanks for your comments.

Best wishes
Ralf