Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
Oh i love this, Ralf :)very poetic scene, wishes, devika
Dear Ralf,how many pictures, sounds and colours you touch - a sensitive walk through early autumn - evening or night - ? - I like it very much...
delightful senses again, you are so good at that, I lvo eit ;)
A lovely image in words Ralf...
this is very poetic, ralf - one of my favourites of yours - I could read it over and over again
Beautiful soothing imagery Ralf - like Emma I read it many times.
Intriguing.
excellent Ralf (congrats on another mainichi entry)
Thanks a lot everybody - I was very unsure, 'cause I thought, this one might embody a sort of plenty.@ John: Couldn't find a verse of mine in Mainichi, but I read very nice haiku from Claudia Brefeld (9.9.) and Rudi Pfaller (10.9.) there.Best wishesRalf
I can hear that rustling..
Herbstfarbene Spätsommerworte...dies gefällt auchherzlich, der Rachel;-)
Dankeschön, Rachel :-)Viele GrüßeRalf
And thank you very much for your friendly comments, Kristin and Gautami.Best wishesRalf
Oh this is perfect. It feels like fall, as if I am covered by the warmest of blankets and roasting pumpkin seeds. T
I really like the joining of -geographical direction- and the moon... it seems to add more value to that word. Fine one Ralf. _m
Thanks a lot, T and _M!Best wishesRalf
Like this very much Ralf, nice feeling to it. I'm enjoying your haiku! Thxx for visiting me on my blog...love your comments! Are we following each other on Twitter?
I just followed you on Twitter...I'm @nibblesandbits
So did I, _dm. And thanks for your comments.Best wishesRalf
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Oh i love this, Ralf :)
very poetic scene,
wishes,
devika
Dear Ralf,
how many pictures, sounds and colours you touch - a sensitive walk through early autumn - evening or night - ? - I like it very much...
delightful senses again, you are so good at that, I lvo eit ;)
A lovely image in words Ralf...
this is very poetic, ralf - one of my favourites of yours - I could read it over and over again
Beautiful soothing imagery Ralf - like Emma I read it many times.
Intriguing.
excellent Ralf (congrats on another mainichi entry)
Thanks a lot everybody - I was very unsure, 'cause I thought, this one might embody a sort of plenty.
@ John: Couldn't find a verse of mine in Mainichi, but I read very nice haiku from Claudia Brefeld (9.9.) and Rudi Pfaller (10.9.) there.
Best wishes
Ralf
I can hear that rustling..
Herbstfarbene Spätsommerworte...
dies gefällt auch
herzlich, der Rachel;-)
Dankeschön, Rachel :-)
Viele Grüße
Ralf
And thank you very much for your friendly comments, Kristin and Gautami.
Best wishes
Ralf
Oh this is perfect. It feels like fall, as if I am covered by the warmest of blankets and roasting pumpkin seeds.
T
I really like the joining of -geographical direction- and the moon... it seems to add more value to that word. Fine one Ralf. _m
Thanks a lot, T and _M!
Best wishes
Ralf
Like this very much Ralf, nice feeling to it. I'm enjoying your haiku! Thxx for visiting me on my blog...love your comments! Are we following each other on Twitter?
I just followed you on Twitter...I'm @nibblesandbits
So did I, _dm. And thanks for your comments.
Best wishes
Ralf
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