28.11.09



stormy autumn night
he cuts an onion in two
against her earache


first almond biscuit ...
she stores away
a plastic pumpkin



Kommentare:

Devika hat gesagt…

oh! so much in this, Ralf...quite a night, it seems! :)

wishes,
devika

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

Well, I think this special "onion cake" we bake in Southern Germany and almond biscuit can't be food in the same evening. I don't see a sequence of two haiku. I just see two texts treating phenomenons in autumn, headache caused by bad weather and retreat in warm living rooms. And we like some sweets better than an artificial decoration when we are frustated by the colder and darker season.
Fine texts about desires in autumn!
Best wishes
Rudi

Lorraine hat gesagt…

Wow affects so many senses, love for the Autumn night, relief of onion to take the bad stuff away...it is an almond sensation, very good for the art, how fabulous are you!!!

LadyArt hat gesagt…

...the horrible pain of earache fading after a treatment with onions - a wonderful experience...


haiku to ponder upon...


Thank you

Masago hat gesagt…

An onion really helps, eh?

Magyar hat gesagt…

So much depends on how this is read in sections... very interesting. _m

Rachel hat gesagt…

Lieber Ralf,
erst einmal Danke für deine lieben Grüße und Wünsche, ich hab mich sehr gefreut ...

Dies war für mich auch erst ein Knobel-Haiku, doch dann das Erkennen des Sinns ....
es ist jedesmal wie eine Explosion ... lächel ...

Supi geschrieben!

herzlich, Rachel

John McDonald hat gesagt…

yes very good one

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much everybody!

@ Rudi: Indeed this set is a seit for I sent the both in to same Shiki Monthly Kukai. One might see them as discussing set if you like, but nobody has to.

@ Vaughn: Yes, it does. Half of an onion on the aching ear, bound with a scarf (or just laying on the side and the veg on it).

@ Rachel: "Explosion" - wowh, was für ein Kompliment. Danke!

Best wishes
Ralf

RBroeker hat gesagt…

@ Lorraine and Gebriele: Great you have the same experience. (And next time I'll pass the onion to this blog, for it is loosing comments while opening another window.)

Best wishes
Ralf

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

first i'm reading about this onion treatment; but on another level the comfort of food and indoors warmth creates a nice cozy mood; the two
verses seem made for each other

much love
gillena

Frank Williams hat gesagt…

Two beautiful poems of the senses...

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much, Gillena and Frank!

Best wishes
Ralf