her freckles
this morning
crossed by easter fire's ashes
shortbread
my taste buds
listen to bagpipes
my mum weeds
in my new patch
The Shiki Monthly, 2010/03
anniversary
my shadow seems to fall
in her's
morning of the final
mother folds
his lucky socks
The Shiki Monthly, 2010/02
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Great group Ralf!
__Extra-fine is your:
...
'my shadow seems to fall in her's'
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(sorry, my first comment... so badly written)
yes nice sets
john
even if I am just repeating what has already been said and thought... these poems are great and the following words:
anniversary
my shadow seems to fall
in her's
is really wonderful!!!
Proposal:
in her's/into hers
to fall into -
her's = her is (which does not exist)
"zusammenfallen" "sich decken mit" oder "sich auflösen in"
they are all there, the positive and the negative... I really love the thought.
Oh you are so talented, I have so much to learn from you!
Lieber Ralf,
SPITZENMÄßIG!!!!
herzlichst, Rachel
Good group. I especially like "anniversary."
anniversary
she laughs again
at my joke
shortbread
my taste buds
listen to bagpipes
Listening with the tongue - that's great synaestesia. Associating the taste of shortbread with Irish (Scottish, English) music, to which you were listening in an English coffeehouse: so I think about that.
Very sensitive and good mix of inside and outside.
Best wishes
Rudi
Thanks a lot everybody. And I will keep on trying to find out about "her's" ...
Best wishes
Ralf
A lovely series of poems, Ralf...
This is a great set Ralf. I really love the 'anniversary' poem especially here.
Very nice group.
Wonderful Ralf!!
Wonderful collection of haiku! "Anniversary" speaks volumes. Simply beautiful. "Morning of the final" is delightful! All are speaking to me, pulling me into the moment.
Thanks a lot. I am very pleased.
Best wishes
Ralf
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