Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
morning breezein a fallen treeleaves rustle
morning breeze—she sortshis hair
some trunkstake picturesof my son's sand castle
fine sets, Ralf :)i like the third image very much, mountains of cloudsworking out designsof my dream castles[14/02/2009http://devika-poetry.blogspot.com/2009/02/castles-in-sky.html]wishes, devikadevika
that was just about sharing, how even at this age the idea of building castles fascinates me....sometimes i see them taking form in the sky :)wishes, devika
elegant beach haikumuch lovegillena
Eloquently written and expressed, Ralf. I turn my face to the breeze, envision the sand castle, and feel the loving fingers brushing through a loved one's hair.
great set, Ralf! _m
Thanks a lot everybody.Best wishesRalf
A special thank you to Devika: Your comments are vivid clouds, your blog is a quite place to enjoy your creativity.Best wishesRalf
oh, that's so good a comment to have...so nice of you, and thanks so much to say it here, Ralf :)best regards, devika