03.08.10


cloudless morning
my little son demands
his own umbrella

Caribbean Kigo Kukai, 8/2010


Kommentare:

Bill hat gesagt…

Good moment.

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

Always prepared, imitating the adults, your son. But nevertheless he seems to get a mind of his own, ignoring the sky. Good sign for development and beginning independance!

Best wishes
Rudi

Magyar hat gesagt…

... and I can carry it too!
__He wanting to face it all, and the beginnings of taking care of himself.

Fine one! _m

Frank hat gesagt…

A charming haiku, Ralf...

Devika hat gesagt…

yes, a charming haiku, Ralf :)

wishes,
devika

Marcel Peltier hat gesagt…

Le fils devient grand. Un beau haïku-senryû.

John McDonald hat gesagt…

lovely sets here Ralf
john

Little Seed hat gesagt…

You have captured his moment of independence, beautifully. Kudos on the 'ku poetic soul.

Lorraine hat gesagt…

a touching moment, love i ;)

Rachel hat gesagt…

TOLL, das passt...

herzlichst, Rachel

Ralf Bröker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot everybody.

Best wishes
Ralf

Alan Summers hat gesagt…

Absolutely wonderful, and observed haiku.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: With Words
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Ralf Bröker hat gesagt…

Thank you, Allan. I will participate when one day one is good enough ...

Best wishes
Ralf