Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
cloudless morningmy little son demandshis own umbrella
Caribbean Kigo Kukai, 8/2010
Always prepared, imitating the adults, your son. But nevertheless he seems to get a mind of his own, ignoring the sky. Good sign for development and beginning independance!Best wishesRudi
... and I can carry it too!__He wanting to face it all, and the beginnings of taking care of himself. Fine one! _m
A charming haiku, Ralf...
yes, a charming haiku, Ralf :)wishes, devika
Le fils devient grand. Un beau haïku-senryû.
lovely sets here Ralfjohn
You have captured his moment of independence, beautifully. Kudos on the 'ku poetic soul.
a touching moment, love i ;)
TOLL, das passt...herzlichst, Rachel
Thanks a lot everybody.Best wishesRalf
Absolutely wonderful, and observed haiku.all my best,AlanThe With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: With Words.
Thank you, Allan. I will participate when one day one is good enough ...Best wishesRalf