16.09.11

 
cherry tree park
everything pink
on the front page



son's room
just a bit of sand
tells his day 





Gerd Börner ...

... is our new guest on Haiku from German Tongues. He writes short poems and short prose.

Kommentare:

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

cherry tree park
everything pink
on the front page

In this haiku I like the strong appeal of colour. It reminds me of the ku about the yellow of daffodils, created by Angelika Wienert. As you did she managed to write about the power of colour.
I appreciate yours and Angelikas haiku. Maybe Angelika reads this comment as well...

Best wishes
Rudi

daffodils
brought to daffodils
in the chapel
(Angelika Wienert, published: Asahi, 2004)

Karol Rosiak hat gesagt…

"cherry tree park
everything pink
on the front page

Ralf Bröker
Ochtrup, Germany"

Good one, Ralf. Congratulations!

K.

John McDonald hat gesagt…

like these rudi
john

Henrique Pimenta hat gesagt…

Muito bom!

Ralf Bröker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much for your comments.

@Rudi: Angelika's haiku works without naming the colour. This is why I admire it. In my little piece I set its name deliberately as link and shift.

Best wishes
Ralf