cherry tree park
everything pink
on the front page
son's room
just a bit of sand
tells his day
Gerd Börner ...
... is our new guest on Haiku from German Tongues. He writes short poems and short prose.
just a bit of sand
tells his day
Gerd Börner ...
... is our new guest on Haiku from German Tongues. He writes short poems and short prose.
5 Kommentare:
cherry tree park
everything pink
on the front page
In this haiku I like the strong appeal of colour. It reminds me of the ku about the yellow of daffodils, created by Angelika Wienert. As you did she managed to write about the power of colour.
I appreciate yours and Angelikas haiku. Maybe Angelika reads this comment as well...
Best wishes
Rudi
daffodils
brought to daffodils
in the chapel
(Angelika Wienert, published: Asahi, 2004)
"cherry tree park
everything pink
on the front page
Ralf Bröker
Ochtrup, Germany"
Good one, Ralf. Congratulations!
K.
like these rudi
john
Muito bom!
Thank you very much for your comments.
@Rudi: Angelika's haiku works without naming the colour. This is why I admire it. In my little piece I set its name deliberately as link and shift.
Best wishes
Ralf
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