02.04.09


the drawer
open – close
her bright eyes

die Lade
auf und zu
ihre großen Augen


          
Haiku heute November 2008


Kommentare:

Dalloway hat gesagt…

glad I found your blog. you have some nice work here. I'll be dropping by again.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Hello Dalloway and thanks, great to have you are for a drop ;-) Will explore your blog in these days.

Best wishes
Ralf

Gillena Cox hat gesagt…

another curt ku; very enticing

much love
gillena

Magyar hat gesagt…

In odd works of my mind: I think of her opening and closing the drawers of HER mind, her eyes brightening at the good thoughts. I like this a lot, Ralf_m

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you, Gillena and Magyar,

Best wishes
Ralf

Devika hat gesagt…

This is really interesting, Ralf
open to multiple readings :)

above all suggesting joy..

wishes,
devika

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

I like the layers to this. Lovely!

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much, you both. But in some days, the pool of published haiku will be on its ground. And then I have to decide how to go on.

Best wishes
Ralf