Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
the draweropen – closeher bright eyes
die Ladeauf und zuihre großen Augen
glad I found your blog. you have some nice work here. I'll be dropping by again.
Hello Dalloway and thanks, great to have you are for a drop ;-) Will explore your blog in these days.Best wishesRalf
another curt ku; very enticingmuch lovegillena
In odd works of my mind: I think of her opening and closing the drawers of HER mind, her eyes brightening at the good thoughts. I like this a lot, Ralf_m
Thank you, Gillena and Magyar,Best wishesRalf
This is really interesting, Ralf open to multiple readings :)above all suggesting joy..wishes, devika
I like the layers to this. Lovely!
Thank you very much, you both. But in some days, the pool of published haiku will be on its ground. And then I have to decide how to go on.Best wishesRalf
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glad I found your blog. you have some nice work here. I'll be dropping by again.
Hello Dalloway and thanks, great to have you are for a drop ;-) Will explore your blog in these days.
Best wishes
Ralf
another curt ku; very enticing
much love
gillena
In odd works of my mind: I think of her opening and closing the drawers of HER mind, her eyes brightening at the good thoughts. I like this a lot, Ralf_m
Thank you, Gillena and Magyar,
Best wishes
Ralf
This is really interesting, Ralf
open to multiple readings :)
above all suggesting joy..
wishes,
devika
I like the layers to this. Lovely!
Thank you very much, you both. But in some days, the pool of published haiku will be on its ground. And then I have to decide how to go on.
Best wishes
Ralf
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