16.05.09



Mother's Day--
her mirror refracts
the morning light


Kommentare:

gautami tripathy hat gesagt…

Refracts..I truly like that!

Devika hat gesagt…

Wonderful haiku, Ralf :)
I wonder if anyone ever used refraction in a haiku :)

wishes,
devika

Rudi Pfaller hat gesagt…

"Morning light" - not "evening light". That's it!

Rudi

Janice Thomson hat gesagt…

What a delightful haiku - 'morning light' makes this special.

Frank Williams hat gesagt…

This is a special haiku Ralf. The last two lines are lovely...

Lorraine hat gesagt…

NOthing like morning light, I like this very much ;)

Cindybrown hat gesagt…

Wonderful :)

Gabriele Brunsch hat gesagt…

Dear R A L F (;-)),

I like this Haiku very much - I see all the those tiny splinters of light on her face...
a smile of cognition...
wonderful.

Thank you

Magyar hat gesagt…

I add my bow.
_m

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thanks a lot everybody. And a special thanks to Gillena Cox, who organizes the Kigo Kukai and made me take part.

Best wishes
Ralf

jem hat gesagt…

That's nice. It's as if the light itself wants to acknowledge her day.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you, jem. This is, what I felt too.

Best wishes
Ralf