Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
Refracts..I truly like that!
Wonderful haiku, Ralf :)I wonder if anyone ever used refraction in a haiku :)wishes, devika
"Morning light" - not "evening light". That's it!Rudi
What a delightful haiku - 'morning light' makes this special.
This is a special haiku Ralf. The last two lines are lovely...
NOthing like morning light, I like this very much ;)
Wonderful :)
Dear R A L F (;-)), I like this Haiku very much - I see all the those tiny splinters of light on her face...a smile of cognition...wonderful.Thank you
I add my bow._m
Thanks a lot everybody. And a special thanks to Gillena Cox, who organizes the Kigo Kukai and made me take part.Best wishesRalf
That's nice. It's as if the light itself wants to acknowledge her day.
Thank you, jem. This is, what I felt too.Best wishesRalf
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Refracts..I truly like that!
Wonderful haiku, Ralf :)
I wonder if anyone ever used refraction in a haiku :)
wishes,
devika
"Morning light" - not "evening light". That's it!
Rudi
What a delightful haiku - 'morning light' makes this special.
This is a special haiku Ralf. The last two lines are lovely...
NOthing like morning light, I like this very much ;)
Wonderful :)
Dear R A L F (;-)),
I like this Haiku very much - I see all the those tiny splinters of light on her face...
a smile of cognition...
wonderful.
Thank you
I add my bow.
_m
Thanks a lot everybody. And a special thanks to Gillena Cox, who organizes the Kigo Kukai and made me take part.
Best wishes
Ralf
That's nice. It's as if the light itself wants to acknowledge her day.
Thank you, jem. This is, what I felt too.
Best wishes
Ralf
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