06.08.09



against the north wind–
so many questions
on board

Kommentare:

Masago hat gesagt…

An instant image!

Devika hat gesagt…

ha! nicely put...

O' Time, reveal
the answers you hold
before my time :)

wishes,
devika

Devika hat gesagt…

But Ralf on a second thought on the second part of my comment....I seek no answers....enough of the same old answers!:)

I was trying to relate, earlier...but them,

wishes,
devika

Lorraine hat gesagt…

This kukai? reminds me of a storm on a fairy boat lol I love this :)

gautami tripathy hat gesagt…

Good thing, isn't it?


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Eema Levanah hat gesagt…

Just began Following you. Enjoying your haiku! Love your play on words in this one. ♥

Laure hat gesagt…

fantastic, Ralf!

Cindybrown hat gesagt…

Very nice Ralf!!

Magyar hat gesagt…

Another fine one, Ralf! _m

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Thank you very much everybody.

@ devika: Your verse? So many layers in it.

@ Eema Levanah: Thanks for dropping. You're always welcome.

@ Laure: can't read your blog anymore. And can't find another way to contact you. Did anything happen, did I make a mistake somehow? If you want to mail me: ralf(at)broeker-online.de

Best wishes
Ralf

Kristin Riggs hat gesagt…

I really like this!

Devika hat gesagt…

yes, Ralf, thanks....layers may be because it was written without much of a thought...it came by itself :)

wishes,
devika

The Dark Lord hat gesagt…

You paint a beautiful picture with words.. the north wind blows with gusto.. driving along a whole horde of stuff at its wake...

J. Andrew Lockhart hat gesagt…

"on board"- I like that

Inside our hands, outside our hearts hat gesagt…

This was wonderful. You have become a favorite of mine.

Soft love,
T

jem hat gesagt…

Good one. I think 'against' works well with the overload of questions, a real sense of battling against them.

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Oh, thanks a lot for your kind comments. And Kristin and Jem, a warm welcome.

Best wishes
Ralf

Kristin Riggs hat gesagt…

Thank you! So happy to be here...love your work!

Kristin

RBroeker hat gesagt…

Upps, Kristin! Just came in by chance - and found your comment. Sorry for answering late! And thanks!

Best wishes
Ralf