Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
An instant image!
ha! nicely put...O' Time, reveal the answers you hold before my time :)wishes, devika
But Ralf on a second thought on the second part of my comment....I seek no answers....enough of the same old answers!:)I was trying to relate, earlier...but them, wishes, devika
This kukai? reminds me of a storm on a fairy boat lol I love this :)
Good thing, isn't it?Kill Word Verification
Just began Following you. Enjoying your haiku! Love your play on words in this one. ♥
fantastic, Ralf!
Very nice Ralf!!
Another fine one, Ralf! _m
Thank you very much everybody.@ devika: Your verse? So many layers in it.@ Eema Levanah: Thanks for dropping. You're always welcome.@ Laure: can't read your blog anymore. And can't find another way to contact you. Did anything happen, did I make a mistake somehow? If you want to mail me: ralf(at)broeker-online.deBest wishesRalf
yes, Ralf, thanks....layers may be because it was written without much of a thought...it came by itself :)wishes, devika
You paint a beautiful picture with words.. the north wind blows with gusto.. driving along a whole horde of stuff at its wake...
"on board"- I like that
This was wonderful. You have become a favorite of mine. Soft love,T
Good one. I think 'against' works well with the overload of questions, a real sense of battling against them.
Oh, thanks a lot for your kind comments. And Kristin and Jem, a warm welcome.Best wishesRalf
Thank you! So happy to be here...love your work!Kristin
Upps, Kristin! Just came in by chance - and found your comment. Sorry for answering late! And thanks!Best wishesRalf
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An instant image!
ha! nicely put...
O' Time, reveal
the answers you hold
before my time :)
wishes,
devika
But Ralf on a second thought on the second part of my comment....I seek no answers....enough of the same old answers!:)
I was trying to relate, earlier...but them,
wishes,
devika
This kukai? reminds me of a storm on a fairy boat lol I love this :)
Good thing, isn't it?
Kill Word Verification
Just began Following you. Enjoying your haiku! Love your play on words in this one. ♥
fantastic, Ralf!
Very nice Ralf!!
Another fine one, Ralf! _m
Thank you very much everybody.
@ devika: Your verse? So many layers in it.
@ Eema Levanah: Thanks for dropping. You're always welcome.
@ Laure: can't read your blog anymore. And can't find another way to contact you. Did anything happen, did I make a mistake somehow? If you want to mail me: ralf(at)broeker-online.de
Best wishes
Ralf
yes, Ralf, thanks....layers may be because it was written without much of a thought...it came by itself :)
wishes,
devika
You paint a beautiful picture with words.. the north wind blows with gusto.. driving along a whole horde of stuff at its wake...
"on board"- I like that
This was wonderful. You have become a favorite of mine.
Soft love,
T
Good one. I think 'against' works well with the overload of questions, a real sense of battling against them.
Oh, thanks a lot for your kind comments. And Kristin and Jem, a warm welcome.
Best wishes
Ralf
Thank you! So happy to be here...love your work!
Kristin
Upps, Kristin! Just came in by chance - and found your comment. Sorry for answering late! And thanks!
Best wishes
Ralf
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