Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
Nice one, Ralf...
A vegetarian cat!?oh,no...it reminds me of our school days when play was more important than lunch at lunchtime -- good 'ku, Ralf :)wishes, devika
__Great picture... the cat chasing the breeze-blown leaf!
and they never give up...on play time, I love this Ralf :)
"Old" two times as a stylistic device - but not too old! This cat is not really old for my perceiving. This cat and this wizened leaf hold the balance between vitality and morbidity. The reader may be unsure how to read this text. That gives this ku a particular appeal.I like it very much!Rudi
Great image, Ralf. Must have been a slow leaf.Best wishes.
Lieber Ralf,stimmt, der Herbst lässt spielen;-)herzlichst, Rachel
Very nice Ralf, I can just picture it!!
love it ralfjohn
A good haiku!And I think that Rudi (see his comment) found the right words: "...the balance between vitality and morbidity...".Best wishes,Angelika
Dev, she was just a lazy one, I think. Rudi, you find words where my words loose chains - great to know that. Carlos, yeah. Angelika, happy to see your comment here.Thank you, Frank, Dave, _m, Lorraine, Henrique, Rachel, Cindy and John. Great to know you liked to be here and to read this.Best wishesRalf