Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
Urban Sethe leaves the trainshe can't finishthe textsandwichboxtomato slicesbalcony-grownshe typesher daughter's birthdayinternetcaféfifth beera national team coach turnsinto a dictatornight bushe knows the manand pretends to sleep
very nice haiku's Ralf
yes, good urban sets, Ralf :)wishes, devika
wow this is a fantastic set, each has its own power, I couldn't tell you which I loved more, mmm maybe the mom/daughter one they're all great, more please ;)
good sequence Ralf
love them the last one gave me a chuckle:)much lovegillena
This Urban Set is an exposition of urban mood done in haiku. I love it!Rudi
These are excellent Ralf. Think I may be guilty of the last one a time or two...Drinking The Moon is back again.
I like'em all! Oooops... I spilled your words, and when I scooped them up, they may have gotten themselves into the wrong place. ;<)fifth beershe can't finishnight bus
Lieber Ralf,ich find sie alle gelungen, kann man doch aus jedem einen Sinn erkennen!!!herzlichst, Rachel
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Thank you very much everybody. Urbanity was submission theme at http://tinywords.com. I enjoy reading some very excellent haiku in this issue.Best wishesRalf