Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
Lovely linkage. I really like the second.__My tears are not in your eyes, yet, I may have caused them._m
Gosh Ralf I too really like that second verse - it brings a lump to my throat...
Sunshine through closed eyes - That's the sun inside as well. Happy must be everybody with this sun inside. I like this image.Best wishesRudi
I get a few sentiments that kind of hurt, it is so beautifully written Ralf...
After reading and reading I've got a dark feeling: I don't hope the second ku describes a funeral (in the eyes of a person who passed away no tears of surviving dependants are depicted). Am I wrong?Best wishesRudi
A good pair
Says it all.
Good sets, Ralf..first one is kind of familiar; and second, could be read in a few ways for the ambiguity in Line 1, wishes, devika
Thank you all!@_m: Yes, my tears are in my eyes - and I was the reason.@Janice: It still has the same effect on me.@Rudi: It opens many ways, I think. The moment it came was more like your first thought. But don't we all think about not being here anymore while watching with closed eyes?@Lorraine: All kind of feelings are all kinds of wealth, I think.@Bill, Masago, Devika: yes!Best wishesRalf