After reading and reading I've got a dark feeling: I don't hope the second ku describes a funeral (in the eyes of a person who passed away no tears of surviving dependants are depicted). Am I wrong?
@_m: Yes, my tears are in my eyes - and I was the reason.
@Janice: It still has the same effect on me.
@Rudi: It opens many ways, I think. The moment it came was more like your first thought. But don't we all think about not being here anymore while watching with closed eyes?
@Lorraine: All kind of feelings are all kinds of wealth, I think.
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Lovely linkage. I really like the second.
__My tears are not in your eyes, yet, I may have caused them.
_m
Gosh Ralf I too really like that second verse - it brings a lump to my throat...
Sunshine through closed eyes - That's the sun inside as well. Happy must be everybody with this sun inside. I like this image.
Best wishes
Rudi
I get a few sentiments that kind of hurt, it is so beautifully written Ralf...
After reading and reading I've got a dark feeling: I don't hope the second ku describes a funeral (in the eyes of a person who passed away no tears of surviving dependants are depicted). Am I wrong?
Best wishes
Rudi
A good pair
Says it all.
Good sets, Ralf..first one is kind of familiar; and second, could be read in a few ways for the ambiguity in Line 1,
wishes,
devika
Thank you all!
@_m: Yes, my tears are in my eyes - and I was the reason.
@Janice: It still has the same effect on me.
@Rudi: It opens many ways, I think. The moment it came was more like your first thought. But don't we all think about not being here anymore while watching with closed eyes?
@Lorraine: All kind of feelings are all kinds of wealth, I think.
@Bill, Masago, Devika: yes!
Best wishes
Ralf
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