Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
What a lovely thing to do on a cold night, lovely mood here Ralf ;)
Last week, someone said of funeral wreaths :)anyway, to me this sounds much better, Ralf...cold spring night-- so alluring..here's its scorching heat! wishes, devika
what a heartwarming ku, i love itmuch lovegillena
A very nice haiku Ralf...
Best thing one can do..:)
there's warmth in this and a promise of better things to come... very nicebtw, english is my second language also so i reckon i'm somewhat limited in its use as well. but that doesn't mean we can't produce good work, no? ;)
Thank you very much everybody for your kind comments. They make me feel good.@ Polona: Limitation can open doors. Haiku is limitation and door opener in itself and in others.Best wishesRalf
Well done Ralf!_m
I like Polona's comment - a warmth of things to come.Im in awe of those that can write haiku in a second language.
Thanks a lot, _m, Cindybrown and Dalloway!Best wishesRalf
Wonderful haiku, the two halves of the haiku certainly make for more than a whole. ;-)bus queuethe chill of spring rainon my fresh haircutall my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition.
Yes Polona pegged this well. Good one!
Thank you, Alan und Janice.@ Alan: Hope to feel good enough one day to take part in your competition.Best wishesRalf