Haiku. Auf Deutsch. Or in English.
What a lovely thing to do on a cold night, lovely mood here Ralf ;)
Last week, someone said of funeral wreaths :)anyway, to me this sounds much better, Ralf...cold spring night-- so alluring..here's its scorching heat! wishes, devika
what a heartwarming ku, i love itmuch lovegillena
A very nice haiku Ralf...
Best thing one can do..:)
there's warmth in this and a promise of better things to come... very nicebtw, english is my second language also so i reckon i'm somewhat limited in its use as well. but that doesn't mean we can't produce good work, no? ;)
Thank you very much everybody for your kind comments. They make me feel good.@ Polona: Limitation can open doors. Haiku is limitation and door opener in itself and in others.Best wishesRalf
Well done Ralf!_m
Very nice:)
I like Polona's comment - a warmth of things to come.Im in awe of those that can write haiku in a second language.
Thanks a lot, _m, Cindybrown and Dalloway!Best wishesRalf
Wonderful haiku, the two halves of the haiku certainly make for more than a whole. ;-)bus queuethe chill of spring rainon my fresh haircutall my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition.
Yes Polona pegged this well. Good one!
Thank you, Alan und Janice.@ Alan: Hope to feel good enough one day to take part in your competition.Best wishesRalf
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What a lovely thing to do on a cold night, lovely mood here Ralf ;)
Last week, someone said of funeral wreaths :)
anyway, to me this sounds much better, Ralf...cold spring night-- so alluring..here's its scorching heat!
wishes,
devika
what a heartwarming ku, i love it
much love
gillena
A very nice haiku Ralf...
Best thing one can do..:)
there's warmth in this and a promise of better things to come... very nice
btw, english is my second language also so i reckon i'm somewhat limited in its use as well. but that doesn't mean we can't produce good work, no? ;)
Thank you very much everybody for your kind comments. They make me feel good.
@ Polona: Limitation can open doors. Haiku is limitation and door opener in itself and in others.
Best wishes
Ralf
Well done Ralf!
_m
Very nice:)
I like Polona's comment - a warmth of things to come.
Im in awe of those that can write haiku in a second language.
Thanks a lot, _m, Cindybrown and Dalloway!
Best wishes
Ralf
Wonderful haiku, the two halves of the haiku certainly make for more than a whole. ;-)
bus queue
the chill of spring rain
on my fresh haircutall my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition.
Yes Polona pegged this well. Good one!
Thank you, Alan und Janice.
@ Alan: Hope to feel good enough one day to take part in your competition.
Best wishes
Ralf
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